Saturday, February 4, 2012

New Story: The Vault, co-written with Dan V. part one

     The other night when we were running errands at Wal-mart, I, of course, found myself in the notebook and pen aisle.  Every so often I like to browse it.  On the spur-of-the-moment, I suggested to Dan that we could try to write a story together.  He actually liked the idea, so we bought a new notebook and two different color pens--mine green, his blue.  Each of us will consult the other on characters and plot and setting, but we trade off the notebook for the other to write a section when we come to a good stopping point.  I've decided to post it as we write since I haven't been writing much lately with my computer dead from a fried mother board and no way to afford a replacement on winter lay-off.  As with the notebook, I will denote my writing in green, and Dan's in blue.



The Vault was the most eccentric bar in Spokane.  The night scene had certainly become livelier with its opening and subsequent surge of popularity.  It was one of only a handful of bars that hadn't gone belly-up during the Big Crash.  It was also one of those rare themed places where the name suited the decor, and was crazy enough to continue to draw a crowd.
The proprietor, a big wall of muscle who looked as if he could have wrestled professionally in his younger days--and often played bouncer when he wasn't doing paperwork--had installed a massive antique bank vault door patrons had to pass through to enter the common room.  There was a second such door to the office.  The tables were built from old safety deposit box racks, as was the bar itself so it could hold any supplies the bartender could want.
The Vault was an idea place for people with "paranormal tendencies" to hang out for an evening of entertainment after enduring a hard day of hiding their abilities from coworkers and family.  Ever since the Big Crash, which had not only screwed with governments world wide, technology, and economy, but also biology--warping genetics of man and beast alike, places like the Vault were widely sought by those whose transformed genetics had given them unique appearances or abilities.  It was a unique hideaway in an otherwise suspicious or outright hostile world.  There were a few "groupies" who frequented the bar as well, obsessed fangirls seeking to hook up with a vampire, werewolf, or other fantastical being.  For the most part, though, it hosted those beings the world preferred to shun and ignore.
Banner was one such creature.  Though it was impossible to tell by common scrutiny--most days Banner was happy he looked normal--Banner was a Pariah.  That's what the world had named these the Big Crash had changed, anyway.  He supposed it was better than freak or mutant or monster or thing, but Pariahs got called those, too, in less official or friendly company.
Banner had what were called Draconic powers.  When his emotions got the better of him, his skin would flush to reveal he was really covered in scales.  He could use them, too, as camouflage, or to even mimic clothes.  He could change faces and skin tones at will, which, if the government found out, would make him a sought-after spy.  It wasn't something Banner intended to disclose.
He did have scales he couldn't hide on his back.  They ran along both sides of his spine, from below his shoulder blades to the small of his back.  They were a dull white like old scars, which is how he played them if they were seen--such as at the gym when he was working out.  If women asked, he claimed a bizarre mountain bike accident in Colorado.  It was partially true.  He had had a bike accident in Colorado while camping with his family--the trip was an annual reunion event, involved the entire family for a week of hiking, biking, skiing, eating, shopping, and catching up with a year's worth of news from all over the United States.  It just hadn't been the cause of his scars.
He was the picture of the rugged outdoor type: unruly brown hair, sparkling green eyes, strapping build without being over-muscled.  He was attractive enough to be hit on by both normal and Pariah women, and usually he enjoyed flirting back, but rarely went beyond that.  He preferred to be picky, especially after seeing his sister's string of romances that had left her two children and no husband, and his cousin's five kids with an equal number of women.  His job didn't allow as much time as he wanted to invest in a relationship, anyway.
Guess that's what comes with security detail for a place like this.
It wasn't a bad line of work, especially on a night like tonight--one of his few days off.  On top of security to keep the frequent attempts at trying to breach the Vault's office for the thrill of it--there seemed to be no end to them, he thought sourly, and it was rapidly becoming tradition for new patrons to give it a shot within hours of their first visit--Banner often played bartender.  Bartending was something of a hobby.  Not to mention it allowed him to get a feel for which customers would be more likely to attempt robbery; sometimes he slipped something into their drinks, or had the bouncers remove them under some other pretense.  Having Draconic abilities had its benefits; he could literally smell a heist brewing.
Tonight, though…
Tonight he didn't care.  It was his day off.  The others could manage without him.  He didn't like handing the responsibilities over to someone else, but he'd burn out otherwise.

Saturday, November 26, 2011

NaNoWriMo Update

I have decided, after much consideration, not to post the remainder of my NaNoWriMo project here on my blog, given it is getting more mysterious foreign traffic than that of friends and family who actually knew I was doing it.  I have written over 61k words currently and still have not reached where they pick up one of my favorite characters (Andur), which is a good sign.  I hope to have him with them by the end of the month (personal goal) or get to 70k words, whichever comes first.  The novel is sitting at 105 pages!  Very exciting.
Once NaNoWriMo is over, I have to give the computer I'm borrowing back to its owner.  That means my writing will probably slow to a crawl again, but I hope not.  I'm going to see if my laptop will plug into an old monitor so I can check to see if the screen is just dead or if there's a bigger problem.  My beloved Alienware has been a trooper all these years, so it may just be time to put it to rest and attempt to save for a new one (after my emergency car purchase is paid for).
This year's NaNoWriMo worked out far differently than last year.  Last year I struggled all month with inspiration and talking to the characters, as I started a 100% brand new story.  This year I wrote the "prequel" story to one I've been working on since elementary school.  I've known the characters a long time and most of this story in my head, but realized I needed to write it down so people would understand the interactions and relationships in the part I've written more recently (Jemspur: Firstborn).  My writing style was stronger since I was already familiar with everyone and the setting, and I wasn't scrambling for ideas since I've known the generalities most of my life.  It was almost pathetically easy to reach the 50k site goal with Dragon-Child.
It was also nice to get a large chunk of something I fully intend for publication done.  It eases the anxiety about ever getting anything finished a little.

Sunday, October 23, 2011

National Novel Writing Month, November 2011

    Well, I find myself facing November and the approach of National Novel Writing Month.  My job has come to an end for the year.  Since July, I've had very little inspiration and no time or interest in writing.  My computer has a problem--the screen stopped working when my Norton Antivirus updated and apparently Vista didn't like it.  Add in some other massive unexpected expenses and problems, and I did not think I would have the time, inspiration, or capability to write this year.
     Then my sister bought me a handmade journal.  At least that way I could write, even if not officially.  I bought new pens to write in it with.  And I got the idea for a story.
     Today, I got access to a computer for the month if mine doesn't fix itself like it did the last time Norton and Vista fought.  I bought a new thumb drive to keep my story on if I need to switch computers between uploads.
    I just hope I get the support and understanding from friends and family.  National Novel Writing Month is a huge sacrifice of time and effort on my part.  I have been wondering a lot this week if the reason all of this stuff has happened and all the doors in my life have shut to allow me to focus on this month and my writing--the thing I have always felt God has called me to do.  To suddenly get inspiration after so long, let alone a renewed interest, is a sign for one.  To get access and supplies is another.
     The story I intend to do is that of Mirinia Dragon-Child, from her creation as far as I can go.  I want to at least reach where she meets Avalan, where most of the current story I have redone starts.  If I can get into that part, even better.  But the goal is to deal with the story involving her and her band of companions, a story I barely began many, many years ago.
    More details and character list to come this week while I sort out and decide for certain if this is what I am to do.

Wednesday, July 27, 2011

Work, work, work.

                I haven’t updated my blog in a while…guess it’s time to remedy that.

                Most of the reason for the delay is work.  The greenhouse has kept me on past two staff cuts, so now my survival is week to week instead of month to month.  I’ve stepped up the job search and applied to multiple libraries across the state, and gotten some suggestions of library-related employment from WLPL where I volunteer.

                Because of all the work, I have not been writing.  With it being summer—in all its heat and humidity glory—I have no energy when I get home at night for any sort of inspiration.  I also haven’t been reading much, as said elements make me very tired so I rest every spare moment I get.

                What I have read I haven’t been recording.  The same with some of the writing I’ve gotten down.

                Dan has been away for two weeks training for his job, which has left me a lot of time to think and evaluate.  We talk on IMer most nights to catch up on daily adventures—such as my computer crashing last night, only four days after the warranty expired; good news, it’s all backed up on the 2TB external my sister and brother-in-law bought me for my birthday.  I also copied my writing files and installed them on the external to be on the safe side.

                On Dan’s suggestion, I’ve started focusing on my rather hefty A New Breed of Warrior rework off my “goals” list.   Originally it was just supposed to be a slight retouching of the sections I’ve already written, but since my writing style has improved and changed  so much in the time since the last rework was started, I need to do a full overhaul.  That puts a lot more pressure on me this year, and Dan thought it best I start whittling away at it.  I went with his suggestion because I was tossing ideas around as to what to throw my focus on—I only have to do about half a chapter to get to my Sunfall goal for the year, and have absolutely no idea how long it would take me to reach Brink’s given I can’t get the characters to talk to me.  I asked Dan which story off my goals list he would be interested in reading, and he suggested New Breed.

                Because I don’t take my computer with me to work, but I have an hour lunch break, I dropped by the back-to-school aisle at the grocery store while getting lunch late last week and bought a couple college-rule notebooks, a pair of my favorite pens, and set myself to brainstorm.  Since I can’t seem to get ideas to finish the first chapter (Dix’s creation and beginning of training), I started thinking about the start of the second (Wolfsong’s nightmare and the status of the mercenaries).

                While I liked the premise of the original chapter I’d written, it just seemed to be too slow at the start, with too much information and not as engaged as I would prefer.  It needed to be more visceral.  I needed to feel Wolfsong’s confusion, terror, and loss better than how I’d written it before.  There’s a lot of information in that chapter I still want, but more compact and integral rather than stated.

                Fresh notebooks and pens have always been one of the best ways to stir inspiration for me, so I wound up getting a considerably better start on the chapter than its original.  Dan is reading both the original and the rework.

                I’m debating  about using my National Novel Writing Month time this year to focus on New Breed’s rework instead of coming up with something new or different.  The intensive span would be good.  Unfortunately, one of the official requirements is that you’re not writing something you’ve already written (translation: you can’t use it for rework).  So I don’t know if I’ll just unofficially use NaNoWriMo, or if I’ll get my rework material done and then focus on the sections in between for the month.  November’s still a ways away, though, so I’ll have a better idea in time.

Monday, June 6, 2011

May 2011 Read List

            Forgotten Realms: Legend of Drizzt Anthology: The Collected Stories
                        (by R.A. Salvatore; novel; anthology)

            Halo: Evolutions volume II
                        (anthology; novel)

            Among Thieves
                        (by Douglas Hulick; novel)

            Bleach, volume 1: Strawberry and the Soul Reapers
                        (by Tite Kubo; manga)

            Bleach, volume 2: Goodbye Parakeet, Good Night my Sista
                        (by Tite Kubo; manga)

            G.I. Joe Volume 1
                        (by IDW publishing; new series; re-read)

            G.I. Joe Volume 2
                        (by IDW publishing; new series; re-read)

            G.I. Joe Volume 3
                        (by IDW publishing; new series; re-read)
            BattleTech: Angry Voices in the Dark
                        (by Loren L. Coleman; revived series; Kindle)

            BattleTech: Trial Under Fire
                        (by Loren L. Coleman; revived series; Kindle)

            BattleTech: A Face Full of Blades
                        (by Loren L. Coleman; revived series; Kindle)

            G.I. Joe: Disavowed Volume 3
                        (by IDW Publishing; graphic novel) 

            The Warded Man
                        (by Peter V. Brett; novel)

            Bleach, volume 3: Memories in the Rain
                        (by Tite Kubo; manga)

            Bleach, volume 4: Quincy Archer Hates You
                        (by Tite Kubo; manga)

            Bleach, volume 5: Right Arm of the Giant
                        (by Tite Kubo; manga)

            Bleach, volume 6: The Death Trilogy Overture
                        (by Tite Kubo; manga)

            Bleach, volume 7: The Broken Coda
                        (by Tite Kubo; manga)

            Bleach, volume 8: The Blade and Me
                        (by Tite Kubo; manga)
 
            Bleach, volume 9: Fourteen Days for Conspiracy
                        (by Tite Kubo; manga)
 
            Bleach, volume 10: Tattoo on the Sky
                        (by Tite Kubo; manga)

            Bleach, volume 11: A Star and a Stray Dog
                        (by Tite Kubo; manga)

            Simon’s Cat
                        (by Simon Tofield; comic)
 
            Simon’s Cat: Beyond the Fence
                        (by Simon Tofield; comic)

Wednesday, May 11, 2011

The Struggles of Inspiration.

            I find it rather ironic…I used to be able to write anywhere, anytime.  I got a lot of writing done in classes in both college and while getting my Masters; my mind liked to be running at full-tilt and simply sitting and listening to instructors and professors lecture apparently didn’t occupy enough of my thought processes.  Instead of chewing gum or playing with my pen or texting on my phone or browsing non-relevant web pages like many of my fellow scholars did, I wrote.  Some of it was taking notes, sure, but most was my own work.

            Don’t get me wrong, writing didn’t keep me from paying attention.  Quite the opposite, in fact.

            I wrote a lot at work, too.  I would jot ideas down, write on my (very scare) breaks.  I would utilize any scrap of time I had to get just that little bit more down on paper.

            Now though…now I can’t seem to write even with long spans of unoccupied time to utilize.  I sit and stare at my computer screen, or at a piece of paper.  I’m tired all the time from working, volunteering, and maintaining my relationships, both with friends over the internet and family, local friends, and my boyfriend.  It’s like the creative part of my brain has shut off.

            This happens to writers.  It’s one of the causes of writer’s block.  It’s frustrating and depressing.

            When it hits, I wonder if I’ve lost the ability I had back in school to tap my creativity.  I get so bogged down in work and life I can’t properly focus on my passion for the craft.  I neglect characters (which honks some off, and causes others to fade out in disappointment or sulk and not talk to me).

            I discovered through National Novel Writing Month I can actually force inspiration out of pure desperation.  I don’t like to do that; it doesn’t feel like I write as well.

            It’s also hard to maintain the creativity and inspiration you need when you’re a chronic worrywart like I am.  With my job situation, the economy, and a multitude of other life worries at my age, it tends to suck the interest and creativity right out of me.

            It helps that I’ve been reading, but it doesn’t help that most of my to-read list is now at Grandma’s, further away than my overpriced storage locker.  I don’t know if the price of gas driving out there is worse than what I was paying.

            I have a little more time next week, which is both good and bad.  Good for me to try to focus on my writing and getting another goal checked off on my list for the year, but bad as it lowers my next paycheck.

            Everything combined keeps hitting me over the head with a huge faith lesson.  God and I have had trust issues for the past five years, due to the loss of a very precious relationship.  I know I’m being held back because of these trust issues.  God wants to make a huge point before we move on.

            I just hope we get it sorted out before I run out of job, funds, or places to live.

Monday, May 2, 2011

2011 Book Read List: April

            Dragon Age Volume 1
                        (by IDW, Orson Scott Card; graphic novel)

            G.I. Joe: Hearts and Minds
                        (by IDW, Max Brooks; graphic novel)

            Star Wars: Crosscurrent
                        (by Paul S. Kemp; novel)

            Indiana Jones and the Secret of the Sphinx
                        (by Max McCoy; novel)


  So much for the 12 novels a month idea!  April saw the start of my greenhouse job, so I’ve had very little reading time.